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-## Time to be committed: become a shareholder
+## Now you can become a shareholder
 
-Thank you everyone for all the support and for believing in our values: sustainable technology made with love, backed by renewable energy. We have often received requests for how to further engaging in our company, and as a part of our Christmas surprise, we are opening a special opportunity for you to join us. For a limited time we are opening up a pool of shares from ungleich glarus ltd to be sold. This offer is only valid until 2020-12-31 - the pool will be closed again on 2021-01-01.
+We have often received requests for how to further engage in our company from various people, especially from those who are passionate about what we do: building a future with sustainable technology. As a part of our Christmas surprise, we made it possible: we are opening a special opportunity for you to join us. For a limited time we are opening up a pool of shares from ungleich glarus ltd to be sold. This offer is only valid until 2020-12-31 - the pool will be closed again on 2021-01-01.
 
 ## How do shares work?
 
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 ## What does becoming a shareholder mean?
 
-Becoming a shareholder of ungleich means you own a bit of ungleich. It makes you a part of a group of people who want to make the world a better place. You are also eligible to participate in the yearly general assembly as well as any future dividend payout.
-By becoming a shareholder, you also support the good cause and our mission as ungleich.
+Becoming a shareholder of ungleich means you own a bit of ungleich. It lets you to be a part of a group of people who want to make the world a better place by sustainable technology made with love, backed by renewable energy. 
+You will be eligible to participate in the yearly general assembly as well as any future dividend payout.
 
 ## What are the conditions?
 The pool contains 15'000 shares with a nominal value of 0.10 CHF each. The selling price is 4 CHF per share and the minimum amount of shares is 1'250 (5000 CHF). It is possible to buy multiple packages as one party.