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@@ -16,18 +16,18 @@ IPv6 is beginning to take off in 2020
 body:
 
 When is IPv6 beginning to matter? When is IPv6 taking off? These are
-questions that we debate in the IPv6 community at meetings and online.
+questions that we debate in the IPv6 community at meetings, online and offline.
 
 For us, 2020 has already become the year of IPv6, even way before it
 is ending.
 
 ## IPv6 traffic reached more than 33% (1/3) of traffic to Google
 
-Acccording to google, IPv6 search traffic already exceeds 33%:
+According to Google, IPv6 search traffic already exceeds 33%:
 
 ![](/u/image/google-ipv6-2020-08-07.png)
 
-The recent growth this year is also attributed to people more working
+The recent growth this year is also attributed to more people working
 from home, where IPv6 is already more present than in business
 connections.
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ search request is made using IPv6.
 [India](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/IN),
 [Belgium](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/BE),
 [the US](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/US) and
-[Malaysa](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/MY) - all of them have
+[Malaysia](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/MY) - all of them have
 passed the 50% IPv6 deployment mark. **India even surpassed the 70%
 mark!**
 
@@ -49,14 +49,14 @@ passing the 50% mark (while we in
 [Switzerland](https://stats.labs.apnic.net/ipv6/CH) only passed the
 40% mark...).
 
-In other words: if you are living or travelling to above countries,
+In other words: if you are living or travelling to the above countries,
 you have a good chance of getting IPv6 - and it's growing.
 
 ## IPv6 community is active and growing
 
 At the moment there are so many cool IPv6 projects and communities
-around, as many as we have never seen active before. Let us list some
-projects we are aware of:
+around, more active than we have ever seen before.
+Let us list some projects/communities we are aware of:
 
 * [IPv6 Buzz](https://packetpushers.net/series/ipv6-buzz/)
   by Ed Horley, Scott Hogg, and Tom Coffeen