++ fixes

content/u/blog/2020-the-year-of-ipv6/contents.lr

@@ -74,16 +74,17 @@ Let us list some projects/communities we are aware of:
 
 For many years we have been watching IPv6 support in (network)
 hardware and open source software. And while not every everything is
-fixed, many pain points have been solved. And what is even better:
-even if your network equipment does not nicely work with IPv6, a lot
-of equipment can now be made IPv6 usable just by flashing
+fixed, many pain points have been solved.
+And the great thing is, even if your network equipment does not work with IPv6 nicely,
+a lot of equipment can now be made IPv6 usable just by flashing
 [OpenWRT](https://openwrt.org/).
 
 
 ## IPv6 everywhere
 
-You might have heard the claims of our CEO, Nico Schottelius, that you
-can have IPv6 everywhere. This year at ungleich we released the
+You might have heard the claims of our CEO, [Nico
+ Schottelius](https://twitter.com/NicoSchottelius),
+ that you can have IPv6 everywhere. This year at ungleich we released the
 [VIIRB](u/products/viirb-ipv6-box/), the world's smallest IPv6
 router.
 
@@ -96,7 +97,7 @@ network: all devices in your network have IPv6 via autoconfiguration.
 ## IPv6 in 2020
 
 So in 2020, you can go out, connect yourself anywhere with IPv6, talk
-about it to many people and get your software easily up and
-running. Oh, and if you think it is just us, we are not the only ones
+about it with everybody and get your software up and running easily.
+Oh, and if you think it is just us, we are not the only ones
 who think [the attitude towards IPv6
 changed!](https://blog.apnic.net/2020/08/03/ipv4-ipv6-and-a-sudden-change-in-attitude/).