From 3879593eba51c71054e6e2cb983a18f841bbdc94 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: sanghee Date: Wed, 22 Jan 2020 14:06:48 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] text edited --- .../u/products/zero-carbon-cloud/contents.lr | 22 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/u/products/zero-carbon-cloud/contents.lr b/content/u/products/zero-carbon-cloud/contents.lr index 791aaf8..2a567f0 100644 --- a/content/u/products/zero-carbon-cloud/contents.lr +++ b/content/u/products/zero-carbon-cloud/contents.lr @@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ feature2_text: New hardware are as bad as fast fashion in terms of the environme --- feature3_title: Go fully conscious --- -feature3_text: Our services are mission-coherent: slim down everything as much as possible for reducing computer power and energy consumption. +feature3_text: We slim down everything as much as possible to reduce computing power and energy consumption. --- content1_text: ## What is Zero Carbon Cloud? -In the era of rapid climate change and sea level rise, we're here to provide an alternative system that does not use environmentally harmful energy sources. It is a safe and clean alternative to your dropbox or google cloud: our cloud storage service is built with sustainability to its core: it is fully renewable and fully recycled. +In the era of rapid climate change and sea level rise, we're here to provide an alternative system that does not use environmentally harmful energy sources. It is a safe and clean alternative to your dropbox or google cloud. Our cloud storage service is built with sustainability to its core: it is fully renewable and fully recycled. ## Whom is Zero Carbon Cloud for? @@ -32,15 +32,13 @@ Zero carbon cloud is suitable for everybody who wants to make a better choice for our environmental future. It is especially suitable for the following usecase. -* If you deal with x GB data or more per month from your phone, tablet, desktop computer, +* If you deal with 100 GB data or more per month from your phone, tablet, desktop computer, laptop computer, servers. -* If your work requires to store or back up data digitally. -* If your work requires to move x GB data from one device to another. -* If you are looking for a cloud service in which you can store your data without -compromising your privacy. +* If your work requires to store or to back up data digitally. +* If your work requires to move 100 GB data or more from one device to another. +* If you need to store your data without compromising your privacy. * If your country’s privacy laws are less reliable than Switzerland. -* If you are located at a geographic region where the political -climate is less stable than your data need to be. +* If you are located at a geographic region where its political climate is less stable than your data need to be. ## How can I access it? @@ -57,7 +55,7 @@ content2_text: Zero Carbon cloud is your own Nextcloud instance stored and run at our datacenter located in Switzerland. -At Zero Carbon Cloud you'll have +At Zero Carbon Cloud you will have * fully scalable storage and backup * your offsite backup for your own NAS * unlimited bandwidth under fair use policy @@ -70,7 +68,7 @@ At Zero Carbon Cloud you will not have * storage run by fossil fuel and unsustainable energy based services * spam mails from us which uses unnecessary bytes that cost all of us from our environment -* cryptocurrency payment option, because we would like to avoid activities that use excessive computing power which result in more carbon emission +* cryptocurrency payment option, because we want to avoid activities that use excessive computing power which result in more carbon emission * unnecessary frills in our web interface which again increase the computing power and result in more carbon emission @@ -112,7 +110,7 @@ offer3_text: * **Ten free IPv6 VPNs** included for increased security * Datacenter location: Glarus, Switzerland * Enhanced security by limiting access to only your devices -* **30% large scale discount** +* **30% large scale discount** applied Recommended for medium to large organisations