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 ## Valentine Machines
 
 Imagine this: instead of the conventional presents we've all seen over and over, give your
-beloved geek something creative. Something that they can enjoy
-not only today, but also tomorrow. And save the planet in the meantime. 
+beloved geek something creative. Something that they can enjoy even after the Valentine's day. And save the planet in the meantime. 
 
 ![](/u/image/valentine-machine.jpg)
 
-Enough of chocolate and raspberry PI, or a robot vacuum. Enough of gifts that destroy the environment with even more CO2 emission in its manufacturing, packaging and shipping. 
-Allow your beloved ones to do something creative with your gift! For instance (no pun intended on the word instance), on a **Valentine Machine (VM).**
+Enough of chocolate boxes and raspberry PIs, or robot vacuums. Enough of gifts that destroy the environment with even more CO2 emission in its manufacturing, packaging and shipping. 
+Give your beloved ones something zero carbon and creative. For instance (no pun intended on the word "instance"), a **Valentine Machine (VM).** 
+
+All VMs from ungleich are fully **zero carbon**. No CO2 emissions from running a VM on [Data Center Light](../projects/data-center-light): our whole infrastructure only runs on clean, renewable energy. 
 
 ## 2020-02-07 to 2020-02-14: 14% discount on valentine machines
 
-The best part: All VMs from ungleich are fully **zero carbon**. No CO2 emissions from running a VM on [Data Center Light](../projects/data-center-light): our whole infrastructure only runs on clean, renewable energy. 
-
 To make it easier to give a cool VM to your beloved one, we give you a
-14% discount on any VM that you buy on IPv6Onlyhosting.com or
-DataCenterLight.ch. 
+14% discount on any VM that you buy on IPv6Onlyhosting.com
+(https://ipv6onlyhosting.com) or
+DataCenterLight.ch.(https://datacenterlight.ch) 
 
 ## How to get 14% discount
 
-Order a VM during the Valentine Machine week (2020-02-07 to 2020-02-14) and go through the checkout, and send us the following message to vm@zerocarbon.shop. 
+Order a VM during the Valentine Machine week 2020-02-07 to 2020-02-14 and go through the checkout, and send us the following message to vm@zerocarbon.shop. 
 "I want a zero carbon Valentine's day!"
-Our team will check your message and will apply the discount for your VM subscription. 
+As soon as our team checks your message, we will apply the discount for your VM subscription.