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-title: Valentine Machine 2020
+title: Zero Carbon Valentine 2020
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 subtitle: A different present
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 ## Valentine Machines
 
-Imagine this: instead of the always same present, you give your
-beloved ones something that is creative. Something that they can enjoy
-not online today, but also tomorrow.
+Imagine this: instead of the conventional presents we've all seen over and over, give your
+beloved geek something creative. Something that they can enjoy
+not only today, but also tomorrow. And save the planet in the meantime. 
 
 ![](/u/image/valentine-machine.jpg)
 
-Should it be yet-another raspberry PI? Or a robot vacuum? Haven't we
-seen all of those for Valentine's already?
-
-Why not allow your beloved one to do something creative? For instance,
-on a **Valentine Machine (VM)**?
+Enough of chocolate and raspberry PI, or a robot vacuum. Enough of gifts that destroy the environment with even more CO2 emission in its manufacturing, packaging and shipping. 
+Allow your beloved ones to do something creative with your gift! For instance (no pun intended on the word instance), on a **Valentine Machine (VM).**
 
 ## 2020-02-07 to 2020-02-14: 14% discount on valentine machines
 
-We think that this makes much more sense and it is actually much, more
-more climate supporting. Because all VMs from ungleich are fully
-**zero carbon**. No emissions from running a VM on [Data Center
-Light](../projects/data-center-light).
+The best part: All VMs from ungleich are fully **zero carbon**. No CO2 emissions from running a VM on [Data Center Light](../projects/data-center-light): our whole infrastructure only runs on clean, renewable energy. 
 
 To make it easier to give a cool VM to your beloved one, we give you a
 14% discount on any VM that you buy on IPv6Onlyhosting.com or
 DataCenterLight.ch. 
+
+## How to get 14% discount
+
+Order a VM during the Valentine Machine week (2020-02-07 to 2020-02-14) and go through the checkout, and send us the following message to vm@zerocarbon.shop. 
+"I want a zero carbon Valentine's day!"
+Our team will check your message and will apply the discount for your VM subscription. 
+