From d4926f77f73e2bf9b76b5195060996693e3f324a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nico Schottelius <nico@nico-notebook.schottelius.org>
Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2021 13:04:34 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] ++rephrase

---
 content/u/products/ungleich-sla/contents.lr | 34 ++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/u/products/ungleich-sla/contents.lr b/content/u/products/ungleich-sla/contents.lr
index 9db9e95..7dfead4 100644
--- a/content/u/products/ungleich-sla/contents.lr
+++ b/content/u/products/ungleich-sla/contents.lr
@@ -23,10 +23,10 @@ If not otherwise specified in the product or service you acquired from
 us, the standard SLA will apply. This SLA covers standard operations
 and is suitable for non-critical deployments. The standard SLA covers:
 
-* Service level: best effort
-* Included for all products
+* Best effort reaction times
 * Support via support@ungleich.ch (answered 09:00-17:00 on work days)
-* Telephone support: not guaranteed
+* Best effort Telephone support
+* Included for all products
 
 ---
 offer1_title: Business SLA: 450 CHF/month
@@ -111,12 +111,12 @@ description4:
             <td>yes, Mo-Su 00:00-23:59</td>
         </tr>
         <tr>
-            <th scope="row">Pricing</th>
+            <th scope="row">Pricing (CHF/month)</th>
             <td>Included for free</td>
             <td>450</td>
             <td>900</td>
-            <td>1800</td>
-            <td>4200</td>
+            <td>1'800</td>
+            <td>4'200</td>
         </tr>
     </tbody>
     </table>
@@ -136,13 +136,7 @@ exception of Swiss national holidays.
 The extended business hours are from 06:00-22:00, Monday to Friday, with the
 exception of Swiss national holidays.
 
-### Business language
-
-As our team is very international, our primary business language is
-English, secondary language is German. On request, we are also
-available in Korean and French.
-
-### <a name="1-business-day"></a> 1 business day
+### <a name="1-business-day"></a> 1 business day reaction times
 
 The request will be answered within the next business day. The table
 below shows the details for every time of the week.
@@ -183,7 +177,7 @@ below shows the details for every time of the week.
 If a work day is a Swiss national holiday it is treated as Friday to
 Monday period.
 
-### <a name="4h-business-hours"></a> 4h during business hours
+### <a name="4h-business-hours"></a> 4h during business hours reaction times
 
 The request will be answered within the 4h during business hours. The
 table below shows the details:
@@ -208,7 +202,7 @@ table below shows the details:
     </table>
 </div>
 
-### <a name="4h-extended-business-hours"></a> 4h during extended business hours
+### <a name="4h-extended-business-hours"></a> 4h during extended business hours reaction times
 
 The request will be answered within the 4h during business hours. The
 table below shows the details:
@@ -234,7 +228,7 @@ table below shows the details:
     </table>
 </div>
 
-### <a name="4h-24x7"></a> Every day 4h response time
+### <a name="4h-24x7"></a> Every day 4h response time reaction times
 
 The request will be answered within the 4h independent of the day or
 time.
@@ -251,9 +245,15 @@ time.
     </table>
 </div>
 
+### Business language
+
+As our team is very international, our primary business language is
+English, secondary language is German. On request, we are also
+available in Korean and French.
+
+
 ## Related pages
 
 * [ungleich Infrastructure Availability](../ungleich-infrastructure-availability)
-* [ungleich SLAs](../ungleich-sla)
 * [ungleich Service Hours](../ungleich-service-hour)
 * [ungleich Support Packages](../ungleich-support-package)