matrix product pricing text, product description edited #7912

content/u/products/hosted-matrix-chat/contents.lr

@@ -23,8 +23,7 @@ description1:
 <h2>What is Matrix?</h2>
 
 <p><a href="https://matrix.org/">Matrix</a> is a modern and decentralised,
-open-source chat solution backed by a dynamic community. It provides many
+open-source chat solution backed by a dynamic community. It provides advanced user-focused features such as end-to-end encryption, bridging or audio
-advanced user-focused features such as end-to-end encryption, bridging or audio
 & video calls.</a></p>
 
 <div class="container">
@@ -35,23 +34,22 @@ advanced user-focused features such as end-to-end encryption, bridging or audio
     <div class="col-md-9">
       <ul>
         <li>
-        The strongest point of Matrix is <b>federation</b>: a Matrix homeserver - which is
+        The strongest point of Matrix is <b>federation</b>: a Matrix homeserver allows you to manage your own community and to join the whole
-        what we offer - allows to manage your own community... and to join the whole
         Matrix network. You will be able to exchange with users on any other Matrix
         server without any special configuration!
         </li>
         <li>
-        End-to-end encryption (E2EE) means that - when enabled - only the sender and
+        You can enable end-to-end encryption (E2EE): only the sender and
-        intended receiver(s) will be able to read the messages: even ungleich, who
+        intended receiver(s) will be able to read the messages. Even ungleich, who
         manages the matrix server, will not be able to access the content of E2EE
         messages.
         </li>
         <li>
-        Our Matrix servers are provided with a TURN server, meaning that you'll be
+        Our Matrix servers are provided with a TURN server: you'll be
         able to use voice and video calls out of the box.
         </li>
         <li>
-        We support bridging to other networks such as Mattermost instances, IRC,
+        You can bridge to other networks: Mattermost instances, IRC,
         Slack, Telegram and more via <a
         href="https://github.com/42wim/matterbridge">Matterbridge</a>.
         </li>
@@ -69,7 +67,7 @@ feature1_text:
 
 The evolution of Matrix is managed through an open governance process,
 supervised by [The Matrix.org Foundation](https://matrix.org/foundation).
-Moreover, all the software backing the network is [Free and Open
+All the software backing the network is [Free and Open
 Source](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_and_open-source_software), which
 guarantees quality and security.
 
@@ -88,8 +86,8 @@ feature3_title: Zero Carbon
 feature3_text:
 We host your Matrix homeserver in our [own
 datacenter](/u/projects/data-center-light/) in Switzerland, which we believe to
-be as ecologically-friendly as a datacenter can get: we use old buildings,
+be as ecologically-friendly as a datacenter can get: we use old factory halls,
-second-hand hydroelectric, passive cooling and are directly plugged into a
+recycled servers, passive cooling and our servers are directly plugged into a
 hydroelectric power plant.
 
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@@ -106,8 +104,7 @@ description3:
       accounts, ~5.0M messages a day, ~40.000 federated servers and even <a
       href="https://archive.fosdem.org/2019/schedule/event/matrix_french_state/">governments</a>!</p>
 
-      <p>A lot of privacy, security and usability work is going on... which
+      <p>A lot of privacy, security and usability work is going on: Matrix will get even more awesome in the coming months!</p>
-      means that Matrix will get even more awesome in the coming months!</p>
 
       <p>You can follow the <a href="https://matrix.org/blog/posts">Matrix.org
       blog</a> to get frequent updates on Matrix's development, and chat with
@@ -124,7 +121,7 @@ description3:
     <div class="col-md-6">
       <h2>Hosted Matrix Chat</h2>
 
-      <p>We will provide you with your own dedicated Matrix 'Home Server', as well as
+      <p>We will provide you with your own dedicated Matrix home server, as well as
       a hosted web client. Matrix requires a domain name in order to join the global
       networks, which will appear in your username (e.g.
       <i>@penguin:example.0co2.cloud</i>): you can either use a subdomain of
@@ -144,18 +141,20 @@ description3:
 
     </div>
     <div class="col-md-6">
-      <h2>Transparent Costs</h2>
+      <h2>How the pricing works</h2>
+
+      <p>We try to be as transparent as possible for our Matrix pricing. The pricing is made of 2 essential parts. 
+      - a one-time set up fee for initially setting up the Matrix instance for you. We set up the Matrix and also customize* the login page with your own logo and text.
+      - a monthly maintenance fee that includes the price of a dedicated virtual machine(VM)** and the fee for maintaining the service.
+      You're all set with above 2 costs for starting your own Matrix.
+
+      * Further customization such as favicon, background and more is possible at additional fee, get in touch with us to learn more. 
+      ** The number of users or size of rooms depend on the size of your VM, and you can scale them anytime you want. The extention will be done according to our standard VM pricing at [our datacenter.](https://datacenterlight.ch)
+      </p>
 
-      <p>The cost of our Matrix-as-a-Service offer is divided between a base maintenance
-      fee and the price of the dedicated Virtual Machine (VM) we deploy for you in
-      our <a href="/u/projects/data-center-light">own datacenter</a>. There is no artifical
-      restriction on the number of users or size of rooms: the only limit is the
-      resources we allocate to your node. We will extend them on demand, following
-      the pricing model (CPU, RAM, Disk) of our <a href="https://datacenterlight.ch/">VM
-      offer</a>.</p>
 
       <div class="alert alert-info">
-      We also offer custom-sized deployment. You can discuss our offer with us by
+      Your usecase doesn't fit the offers below? We do custom-sized deployment for you. Get in touch with us by
       email or even on matrix, via <a
       href="https://matrix.to/#/%23matrix:ungleich.ch">#matrix:ungleich.ch</a>!
       </div>